Gregory Richard Barden Poet Rhyme

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Christmas Star

Patient star
          Shining bright
   Reaching far ...

Three kings stir
          Deep, the night
     Gold and myrrh ...

Lil' lamb's birth
          Heaven's light ...
     Peace to earth.






~ 2nd Place ~  in the "3-Cubed Christmas" Poetry Contest, Andrea Dietrich, Judge & Sponsor.

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Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 1:03 PM - Congratulations on your great winning poem, Gregory :) - Happy New Year ... with new poems and new contests ... new chances and new ideas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus December 29, 2019 at 11:23 AM This is indeed a very Christmassy night's offering, Greg! Peace to you as well! Congratulations on a very fine win. Regards // paul

Janice Canerdy December 28, 2019 at 4:37 PM CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Greg. Janice Gregory Richard Barden December 28, 2019 at 5:01 PM That's very sweet of you, Janice, thank you so much for taking the time to comment. Blessings! :o) <3

Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2019 at 2:59 PM Loved the stir and myrrh rhyme in this one, Greg. Not too keen on lil' but other than that, SUPERB!! Congrats, buddy. Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2019 at 3:34 PM lil' makes me think of Lil' Abner or something kind of comical while this is a more elegant type of poem even though it is very short. I'll soupmail you some more of my strange ideas! Gregory Richard Barden December 28, 2019 at 3:08 PM Thank you so much, Andrea ... what's the issue with lil' lamb? Merry Christmas

Connie Marcum Wong December 28, 2019 at 2:58 PM You honor our Lord in this lovely entry Greg. Kudos on your second place win. Have a wonderful New year! : ) xxoo Gregory Richard Barden December 28, 2019 at 3:12 PM Many kind thanks, Connie - I felt this was my best Rictameter ever, and the REAL meaning of Christmas ... I should have gone the generic "fun" route. So happy you liked it! :o)

Joseph May December 22, 2019 at 6:53 AM A heartfelt write Greg, Blessing to you and yours this Yuletide season.. Gregory Richard Barden December 28, 2019 at 3:08 PM Thanks so much, Joseph - the same to you, my friend! :o)

Na Na December 22, 2019 at 5:09 AM Amazing entry for the contest Greg. Best of luck. Thanks for sharing this Gregory Richard Barden December 28, 2019 at 3:08 PM Thank you very much, Gregory.