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Patient star Shining bright Reaching far ... Three kings stir Deep, the night Gold and myrrh ... Lil' lamb's birth Heaven's light ... Peace to earth. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "3-Cubed Christmas" Poetry Contest, Andrea Dietrich, Judge & Sponsor.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2019 1:03:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Gregory :) - Happy New Year ... with new poems and new contests ... new chances and new ideas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/29/2019 11:23:00 AM

This is indeed a very Christmassy night's offering, Greg! Peace to you as well! Congratulations on a very fine win. Regards // paul

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/28/2019 4:37:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Greg. Janice

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/28/2019 5:01:00 PM

That's very sweet of you, Janice, thank you so much for taking the time to comment. Blessings! :o) <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2019 2:59:00 PM

Loved the stir and myrrh rhyme in this one, Greg. Not too keen on lil' but other than that, SUPERB!! Congrats, buddy.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/28/2019 3:34:00 PM

lil' makes me think of Lil' Abner or something kind of comical while this is a more elegant type of poem even though it is very short. I'll soupmail you some more of my strange ideas!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/28/2019 3:08:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea ... what's the issue with lil' lamb? Merry Christmas

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/28/2019 2:58:00 PM

You honor our Lord in this lovely entry Greg. Kudos on your second place win. Have a wonderful New year! : ) xxoo

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/28/2019 3:12:00 PM

Many kind thanks, Connie - I felt this was my best Rictameter ever, and the REAL meaning of Christmas ... I should have gone the generic "fun" route. So happy you liked it! :o)

Joseph May

Date: 12/22/2019 6:53:00 AM

A heartfelt write Greg, Blessing to you and yours this Yuletide season..

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/28/2019 3:08:00 PM

Thanks so much, Joseph - the same to you, my friend! :o)

Na Na

Date: 12/22/2019 5:09:00 AM

Amazing entry for the contest Greg. Best of luck. Thanks for sharing this

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/28/2019 3:08:00 PM

Thank you very much, Gregory.