Christmas Scene Senryu

outdoors, the wind blows inside, a fireplace, glows presents, stacked in rows 12/21/2022 Rhyming Senrryu

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Line Gauthier

Date: 12/25/2022 3:07:00 PM

Delightful ~ Warmest wishes for a wonderful new year to your and your loved ones, Panagiota ~

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/25/2022 4:46:00 PM

Line, A merry Christmas from my heart to yours. You are one of my first readers. I remember that. Panagiota xxoo See more of you in 2023..

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/24/2022 11:05:00 AM

A pretty write. Yes, a warm fire with many gifts. Cookies and coffee toooooo. Have a blessed day writing away..........

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/25/2022 4:44:00 PM

Merry Christmas, dear One. Glad, glad you are back. Gifts today were plentiful. Turkey about ready. Come on Down! Panagiota xxxooo

Paul Callus

Date: 12/23/2022 5:59:00 AM

Your exterior and interior images are what we usually expect in Christmas time, Pangie. It is good to know that we can make up for the cold by keeping warm inside. Here a thought goes out to those who are less fortune for various reasons, and to others whose loneliness can be brightened up by surprise visits. ~ May I offer you wishes for a happy Christmas filled with peace, love and blessings. Regards // paul

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/23/2022 6:11:00 PM

Dear Paul, how very right on you are! I remember times that Christmases were far from easy for me and yet I made it through those hard times and I hope they made me a better person. Extending wishes does help and inviting someone to your home is even better if that’s possible. I’ve personally with you a sincere hopeful happy holiday season and also in the new year of 2023. I think it’s going to be a good year, a very good year! Love, Pangie xxoo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/22/2022 6:38:00 PM

Perfectly 'presented' senryu, Pangie. Merry, merry Christmas to you! :) gw

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/22/2022 7:10:00 PM

Hey! Merry Holidays to us both. I got my Chanukah gift today from a thoughtful daughter. Pangie

Elena Eagle

Date: 12/22/2022 10:45:00 AM

Very well done. A great visual for Christmas done is a poem.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/22/2022 3:46:00 PM

I am so glad you like this! Thank you for expressing your feeling. I am reconsidering it as a Haiku. Senryus are not about nature .yet this was a cobination of both. Love, Pangie xoxo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/21/2022 11:36:00 PM

Bliss Pangie, a delightful Christmas scene. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/22/2022 3:03:00 AM

Dear Tom, I knew you had the soul to see this! I will be with my family both days. Cannot believe Eddie is driving, a Junior and is six foot two. Me? Four foot, eleven inches, Love, Mrs, Pangie Claus xoxo