Christmas Ritualized

Christmas memories
Dingy stockings hung with care
Recycled lights shine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Laan Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 2:45 AM
I get sadness in this haiku as the memories are recalled with a dingy stocking and recycled lights. There is loss in this one but beautifully written. Maybe I am wrong but I feel the ritual just has to be carried out in spite of you not wanting to do Christmas. Really love this, thank you. I write non traditional haiku (not the 5, 7, 5) but less, is that okay to post here?
Babcock Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 8:16 AM
Enjoyed reading your Haiku this morning. God Bless Phyl
Mehta Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Nice meaningful write on how Christmas is ritualized, Stephen
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