Jenish Somadas Poet Rhyme

Christmas Is On

Bells on toll
Lights are lit
Songs are hit

Stable built
Son of God
Born in it

Deer in flight
Gifts in sight
Joy and faith.



Won sixth place in Have A Merry 3-Cubed Christmas Poetry Contest sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

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Connie Marcum Wong December 31, 2019 at 10:39 PM Congratulations on your win Jenish! Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! ; ) Jenish Somadas December 31, 2019 at 10:44 PM Thank you.. Sunat Jadidat Saeida....

Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 12:53 PM - Congratulations on your great winning poem, Jenish :) - Happy New Year ... with new poems and new contests ... new chances and new ideas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jenish Somadas December 29, 2019 at 11:11 PM Thank you Anne.. Happy New Year..

Paul Callus December 29, 2019 at 12:32 PM Pity about the rhyming, Jenish; this would have placed higher! Congrats on your win. Regards // paul Jenish Somadas December 29, 2019 at 11:11 PM Thank you Paul...

Ann Foster December 23, 2019 at 10:26 PM This was fun. hehe... Ann Jenish Somadas December 23, 2019 at 11:48 PM Thank you Ann.. Merry Christmas..

M. L. Kiser December 20, 2019 at 11:19 AM Ooh well done, good luck in the contest and Happy Holidays! Jenish Somadas December 20, 2019 at 11:51 AM Thank you Kiser..

Demetrios Trifiatis December 17, 2019 at 7:14 AM Festive writing . Hearts are jolly my friend, Jenish Jenish Somadas December 17, 2019 at 9:42 AM Thanks Demetrios.. Merry Chistmas..

Vijay Pandit December 17, 2019 at 6:54 AM Your poem has the festive sound and happy bounce--well written, Jenish. All the best. Jenish Somadas December 17, 2019 at 9:41 AM Thank you for the kind words..

Na Na December 16, 2019 at 10:56 PM Nice going Jen. This is pretty good. Best of luck in the contest Jenish Somadas December 17, 2019 at 9:39 AM Thank you Gregory..