Get Your Premium Membership

Christmas Eve

Christmas eve It wasn't quite a silent night wrapping and bows had taken flight the girls were stirring in their bed cause egg nogg'ed parents had made their stead They giggled and jostled through the packing the presents under the tree were stacking so, if you find a miss label or two the cat deserved the skate board blue the dog needed the harry potter and lil' sis could use the collared trotter Dad needed the pink sparkly dress Mom loves the hunting knife from Hess Big sis loves her cat nip ball the family needed the toy barn stall so, practice your nicest sharing love of course is in the pairing the matching of the gift to you is in the magic as nut meg flew so, Merry Christmas to all, and to all a good night. -Lisa Treweek

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/26/2014 5:19:00 AM
- Warm welcome to P- soup, Lisa :) - Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year 2015 !!! - // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 12/25/2014 9:16:00 PM
Lisa , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
Login to Reply
Date: 12/24/2014 9:49:00 AM
Lisa, I really enjoyed reading this excellent Christmas story write! I love the imagery and wit! Wishing you a happy and prosperous 2015! Pandita
Login to Reply
Date: 12/24/2014 8:53:00 AM
Lovely write on Christmas ve, merry Christmas, Lisa
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things