Christmas Eve

Christmas eve

 It wasn't quite a silent night
 wrapping and bows had taken flight
 the girls were stirring in their bed
 cause egg nogg'ed parents had made their stead
 They giggled and jostled through the packing
 the presents under the tree were stacking
 so, if you find a miss label or two
 the cat deserved the skate board blue
 the dog needed the harry potter
 and lil' sis could use the collared trotter
 Dad needed the pink sparkly dress
 Mom loves the hunting knife from Hess
 Big sis loves her cat nip ball
 the family needed the toy barn stall
 so, practice your nicest sharing
 love of course is in the pairing
 the matching of the gift to you 
 is in the magic as nut meg flew

so, Merry Christmas to all,
 and to all a good night.

-Lisa Treweek
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 26, 2014 at 5:19 AM
- Warm welcome to P- soup, Lisa :) - Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year 2015 !!! - // Anne-Lise :)
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December 25, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Lisa , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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December 24, 2014 at 9:49 AM
Lisa, I really enjoyed reading this excellent Christmas story write! I love the imagery and wit! Wishing you a happy and prosperous 2015! Pandita
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December 24, 2014 at 8:53 AM
Lovely write on Christmas ve, merry Christmas, Lisa
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