Christmas Eve

Large white flakes falling
Rooftop sounds muffled by snow
An unsleeping child
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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December 21, 2015 at 4:23 PM
Shawn, I like this. :) **SKAT**
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May 13, 2011 at 8:03 AM
Shawn.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d
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May 9, 2011 at 10:26 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Shawn. Love, Carol
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May 9, 2011 at 5:28 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Shawn
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May 8, 2011 at 4:49 PM
Congrats Shawn on your featured poem this week on P.S., .. a great one to share with us all with luv on this special day of luv..
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December 14, 2009 at 3:02 PM
As I am sitting here reading your wonderful poetry today, I would like to thank you Shawn. First I would like to thank you for writing and sharing your poetry (whether one poem or a thousand) here at PoetrySoup.Second I would like to thank you for all your kind comments to me and to all the other excellent poets also. I wish you all the best in life and in your writing endeavors in 2010. Love and blessings to all, Carol
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December 13, 2009 at 9:30 PM
Ah, yes! How hard it is for a child to sleep while listening for the sound of reindeer hoofs on the rooftop. Lovely haiku, Shawn! Best wishes for a Merry Christmas! Carolyn
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