Christmas Eve

Large white flakes falling Rooftop sounds muffled by snow An unsleeping child

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Skat A

Date: 12/21/2015 4:23:00 PM

Shawn, I like this. :) **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2011 8:03:00 AM

Shawn.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/9/2011 10:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Shawn. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/9/2011 5:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Shawn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/8/2011 4:49:00 PM

Congrats Shawn on your featured poem this week on P.S., .. a great one to share with us all with luv on this special day of luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2009 3:02:00 PM

As I am sitting here reading your wonderful poetry today, I would like to thank you Shawn. First I would like to thank you for writing and sharing your poetry (whether one poem or a thousand) here at PoetrySoup.Second I would like to thank you for all your kind comments to me and to all the other excellent poets also. I wish you all the best in life and in your writing endeavors in 2010. Love and blessings to all, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/13/2009 9:30:00 PM

Ah, yes! How hard it is for a child to sleep while listening for the sound of reindeer hoofs on the rooftop. Lovely haiku, Shawn! Best wishes for a Merry Christmas! Carolyn