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Christmas Doses

(5 letter-words per line) Christmas frolic now spreads unwrapped, all love intended packs unstrapped. Each gift ribboned emotions rapt to reveal joy poignantly apt. Memories have great heart impact people seek to keep intact. Christmas doses produce love extract to sweeten cheers lasting distract. May love I Christmas exact imprint Christmas love as fact. ... CayCay Jennings December 29, 2017

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/31/2017 12:30:00 AM

I was thinking the same thing as Andrea CayCay. I feel let down when Christmas ends. Blessings, Connie : )

Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/1/2018 6:18:00 PM

I have to take it all down! Sooo pretty the house is, but it is time. Still have my sister here, at Mom's thru Friday and I'm going there tomorrow. In a way, I'm glad all those I love came and WENT so I can be a slob again and on Soup! Love ya ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2017 5:54:00 PM

Sweetie, you just want the season to go on and on. I love how you did this in monorhyme. Not easy to do with just five words per line. I especially loved that first fun line and the unique descriptions of "ribboned emotions" and "Christmas doses" (from which you got your cute title!)

John Gondolf

Date: 12/30/2017 8:39:00 AM

CayCay, a Christmas gift wrapped by your words, thank you. All the best. John

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/30/2017 9:28:00 AM

Your comment is so sweet, John. I am blessed to have thus gifted you. Happy New Year, my new poet friend. All the best and then some ... CayCay

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/29/2017 12:20:00 PM

so well designed with such poetic flair, cay... delighted!...huggs

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/29/2017 7:42:00 PM

It's good to see you, Nette. Hope you had a good holiday, and, remember that 'good' is a powerful word. Happy New Year to you, as well. In fact, all the best of the best! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Silent One

Date: 12/29/2017 10:26:00 AM

You did this very well, nice to see a seasonal one.. Good luck in the contest..

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/29/2017 7:41:00 PM

Thank you, SO, and also thanks for hosting contests. Your presence on Soup adds only all things good to each writer's experience. Happy New Year, happy new writes and so much more ... CayCay