Christmas Doses

(5 words per line) Christmas frolic now spreads unwrapped, all love intended packs unstrapped. Each gift ribboned emotions rapt to reveal joy poignantly apt. Memories have great heart impact people seek to keep intact. Christmas doses produce love extract to sweeten cheers lasting distract. May love I Christmas exact, imprint Christmas love as fact.
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Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 6:43 PM
Came way back here to say. My Titanic poem was genius. Hahaha
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 12:30 AM
I was thinking the same thing as Andrea CayCay. I feel let down when Christmas ends. Blessings, Connie : )
Godwin Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 6:18 PM
I have to take it all down! Sooo pretty the house is, but it is time. Still have my sister here, at Mom's thru Friday and I'm going there tomorrow. In a way, I'm glad all those I love came and WENT so I can be a slob again and on Soup! Love ya ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 5:54 PM
Sweetie, you just want the season to go on and on. I love how you did this in monorhyme. Not easy to do with just five words per line. I especially loved that first fun line and the unique descriptions of "ribboned emotions" and "Christmas doses" (from which you got your cute title!)
Gondolf Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 8:39 AM
CayCay, a Christmas gift wrapped by your words, thank you. All the best. John
Godwin Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 9:28 AM
Your comment is so sweet, John. I am blessed to have thus gifted you. Happy New Year, my new poet friend. All the best and then some ... CayCay
Onclaud Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 12:20 PM
so well designed with such poetic flair, cay... delighted!...huggs
Godwin Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 7:42 PM
It's good to see you, Nette. Hope you had a good holiday, and, remember that 'good' is a powerful word. Happy New Year to you, as well. In fact, all the best of the best! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
One Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 10:26 AM
You did this very well, nice to see a seasonal one.. Good luck in the contest..
Godwin Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 7:41 PM
Thank you, SO, and also thanks for hosting contests. Your presence on Soup adds only all things good to each writer's experience. Happy New Year, happy new writes and so much more ... CayCay
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