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Christmas Day

It’s almost Christmas , still I'm quite annoyed Visions of North Pole, now crumpled and foiled; While youngsters for deer bells to ring My palms tuck ears from voices caroling. Fireplace adorned with trinkets on Yule rug Awaiting Ole Claus to sneak by... humbug! Wishes for red bike never came last year My card he ignored, did it disappear? Now, I wonder if you really exist... My eyes teary, as I’m not on the list Even Mama dances by the flames so proud, Repeating your name (Vixen’s too), aloud. “Dear Santa, I doubt the speed of your ride How can you bring presents in hours, worldwide? " Till a note falls,“ Child, you have to believe In the kindness this season can weave.” Surprised, my bike turns out... my delight, Faith jingling , “Merry Christmas; good night!” Laura Loo's Contest:: Any poem written on your birthday II Written 1/8/2017( my birthdate) Submitted 7/12.2017
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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 2:34 PM
Nostalgic Nette. Congratulations on your win! : )
Scars Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 7:13 AM
Very cute sweet Nette! Christmas is only 4 more has away! Eeerk! Thank you
Y. Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 10:03 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your first place win in my Christmas Day contest: -) Alexis
Dutta Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 9:37 PM
Enjoyed the lovely poem. Congrats Nette n love.
Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2017 at 3:47 PM
what a CUTE one. Is this contest still not filled? We may be having Christmas still in the new year!! So nicely done, and I'm glad you liked the root poem.
Callus Avatar
January 9, 2017 at 3:38 PM
This reminds me of Thomas who needed concrete proof to strengthen his belief! He got to see the Master, and you got your bike! Enjoyed these delightful couplets, Nette. I hope you've had a most lovely birthday:) Hugs // paul
Aniagyei Avatar
January 9, 2017 at 1:09 PM
wonderful rhyme, nice piece, Nette!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 9, 2017 at 11:17 AM
Only 356 days to Christmas! I enjoyed your poem Nette, hugs Rick.
Roper Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 3:11 PM
Very good, Nette, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 2:30 PM
- A wonderful poem with happy final phase, Nette -* HOORAY ..... HAPPY BIRTHDAY 08.01.2017 !!! * - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 1:21 PM
Great Christmas poem, nette. Once the spirit has left, one feels a certain sense of relief. My Christmases are spent alone, so once they have past, they always look a little better in the rear view.
Ongado Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 1:08 PM
Sentimental look at how we , children once, would like to get what we exactly need. Faith abounds in your enchanting story!
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 12:05 PM
A charming poem Nette and I am so glad it had a happy ending:-) hugs Jan xx
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