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Christmas Day

Prime rib burnt Heat culprit Some sides weren't Bean salad Garden fresh Taste valid Christmas gifts Jesus birth Music riffs 12/23/2019 Have a Merry 3-Cubed Christmas Poetry Contest Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich Checked with How Many syllables

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/31/2019 10:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Eve. Music always makes Christmas Merry! Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2019 12:54:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Eve :) - Happy New Year ... with new poems and new contests ... new chances and new ideas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/29/2019 12:25:00 PM

This could have placed much higher, Eve! That middle line needs his ear pulled:) Congratulations & Happy New Year! Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2019 3:21:00 PM

Eve, I really love your poem. The middle lines of the three stanzas needed to rhyme. Otherwise, this one was a fave of mine. Sorry my contest rules were not spelled out as well as they could have been! Congrats for the win and thanks so much for your entry.

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/25/2019 11:15:00 PM

Wow! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones.

Silent One

Date: 12/24/2019 5:54:00 AM

You did this very well.. Great choice for the contest..

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/23/2019 10:36:00 PM

Eve, The prime rib sounds so nice. Absolutely believe that.,we can know change. Even if no one liked the bean salad but me. Just as long as there is someone to share it. -Richard