Christmas Day

Prime rib burnt
Heat culprit
Some sides weren't

Bean salad
Garden fresh
Taste valid

Christmas gifts 
Jesus birth
Music  riffs

12/23/2019

Have a Merry 3-Cubed Christmas Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich
Checked with How Many syllables
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 10:37 PM
Congratulations on your win Eve. Music always makes Christmas Merry! Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! xxoo
Andresen Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 12:54 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Eve :) - Happy New Year ... with new poems and new contests ... new chances and new ideas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 12:25 PM
This could have placed much higher, Eve! That middle line needs his ear pulled:) Congratulations & Happy New Year! Hugs // paul
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 3:21 PM
Eve, I really love your poem. The middle lines of the three stanzas needed to rhyme. Otherwise, this one was a fave of mine. Sorry my contest rules were not spelled out as well as they could have been! Congrats for the win and thanks so much for your entry.
Agustin Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 11:15 PM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones.
One Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 5:54 AM
You did this very well.. Great choice for the contest..
Theraven Avatar
December 23, 2019 at 10:36 PM
Eve, The prime rib sounds so nice. Absolutely believe that.,we can know change. Even if no one liked the bean salad but me. Just as long as there is someone to share it. -Richard
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