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Christmas Cubed

Trees to trim Bulbs amuck! Lights ‘bove brim Huge red suit Belly stuck--- bad lawsuit! Eve turns dim God’s love struck- “thanks for Him….” ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 12.22.19 Have a Merry 3-Cubed Christmas Poetry Contest Andrea Dietrich

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/31/2019 10:24:00 PM

A happy ending...Congratulations on your win LuLoo! Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2019 12:58:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning poem, L.L. :) - Happy New Year ... with new poems and new contests ... new chances and new ideas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/29/2019 11:46:00 AM

All three stanzas are good reasons for projecting a Christmassy atmosphere, Laura! Congratulations on your fine win. Warm regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2019 3:08:00 PM

that middle stanza was hilarious, Lu Loo. Thanks so much for entering my contest and congrats for the win.

John Watt

Date: 12/26/2019 7:11:00 PM

Luloo, so whimsical! Good luck in your contest - it must be hard to squeeze all of that into 3 cubed. I love "bulbs amuck" and "bad lawsuit" plus the thoughtful ending remembering the reason for the season. God bless you, my poet friend. ~ J