Beautiful Scars Poet Rhyme

Christmas Cubed

Trees to trim
Bulbs amuck!
Lights ‘bove brim
		
Huge red suit
Belly stuck---
bad lawsuit!
 
Eve turns dim
God’s love struck-		
“thanks for Him….”

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12.22.19
Have a Merry 3-Cubed Christmas Poetry Contest
Andrea Dietrich

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Connie Marcum Wong December 31, 2019 at 10:24 PM A happy ending...Congratulations on your win LuLoo! Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 12:58 PM - Congratulations on your great winning poem, L.L. :) - Happy New Year ... with new poems and new contests ... new chances and new ideas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus December 29, 2019 at 11:46 AM All three stanzas are good reasons for projecting a Christmassy atmosphere, Laura! Congratulations on your fine win. Warm regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2019 at 3:08 PM that middle stanza was hilarious, Lu Loo. Thanks so much for entering my contest and congrats for the win.

John Watt December 26, 2019 at 7:11 PM Luloo, so whimsical! Good luck in your contest - it must be hard to squeeze all of that into 3 cubed. I love "bulbs amuck" and "bad lawsuit" plus the thoughtful ending remembering the reason for the season. God bless you, my poet friend. ~ J