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Christmas Blue

forget a short while ‘til the light of Christmas dims and I remember… For Andrea’s contest

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/14/2013 8:26:00 PM

Well penned. Congrats, Tim!

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/12/2013 8:05:00 PM

ahh......this can be so true to life. How for a moment, one can forget, while distracted with the busyness.......until the train of thought comes down the track again, and runs you down. Well said in your amazing tanka. Congratulations my friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2013 3:44:00 PM

this was so very interesting, Tim. Simple and yet profound at the same time. Congrats in my contest. susan loved it too.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/12/2013 8:17:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Tim. The sadness of things we cannot forget packed into a few words from your talented pen.

Donna Jones

Date: 12/12/2013 7:18:00 AM

Hey Tim....unforgettle senryu...congratulations

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/4/2013 3:19:00 PM

This touches the heart Tim

Kathryn Collins

Date: 12/4/2013 8:50:00 AM

Tim - I get to reading your poetry and can't pull myself away, but the dentist calls. He will never cause a pain like this. Sometimes I long for novacaine. love, Kathy

Poet Tacito

Date: 11/27/2013 12:07:00 PM

Deeply intense & sad. A very poignant Senryu.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/26/2013 9:55:00 PM

Very touchy and short, Tim

Deb Wilson

Date: 11/26/2013 8:44:00 PM

so sad ...but lovely...luv,Deb