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Christmas Blue

forget a short while
‘til the light of Christmas dims
and I remember…

For Andrea’s contest

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Juliet Ligon

December 14, 2013 at 8:26 PM

Well penned. Congrats, Tim!

Carrie Richards

December 12, 2013 at 8:05 PM

ahh......this can be so true to life. How for a moment, one can forget, while distracted with the busyness.......until the train of thought comes down the track again, and runs you down. Well said in your amazing tanka. Congratulations my friend!

Andrea Dietrich

December 12, 2013 at 3:44 PM

this was so very interesting, Tim. Simple and yet profound at the same time. Congrats in my contest. susan loved it too.

Monterey Sirak

December 12, 2013 at 8:17 AM

Congrats on your win, Tim. The sadness of things we cannot forget packed into a few words from your talented pen.

Donna Jones

December 12, 2013 at 7:18 AM

Hey Tim....unforgettle senryu...congratulations

Charmaine Chircop

December 4, 2013 at 3:19 PM

This touches the heart Tim

Kathryn Collins

December 4, 2013 at 8:50 AM

Tim - I get to reading your poetry and can't pull myself away, but the dentist calls. He will never cause a pain like this. Sometimes I long for novacaine. love, Kathy