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Christmas Alone

room reverberates with silence a decorated Christmas tree

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/30/2014 12:42:00 AM
A decorated tree can bring back those good memories when we feel alone at Christmastime... You've expressed so much in just these two short lines. Nice work, Sara!
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Date: 11/26/2014 2:48:00 PM
Well done...great title too! :)
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:22:00 PM
oh, such a sad one here - very good, though
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Date: 11/24/2014 6:03:00 PM
'wow, sara, I think you have really captured the essence of this form. I love this.
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Date: 11/24/2014 12:07:00 PM
Nice reflective write Sara!
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Date: 11/24/2014 11:25:00 AM
Sad but sweet! Have a good Thanksgiving! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/24/2014 9:04:00 AM
This Monoku could have two different interpretations...one when I sit down alone and quietly admire my decorated tree....or else having Christmas tree and decorations ready, but no one to share them with. // paul
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Date: 11/24/2014 8:33:00 AM
This little gem evokes such sadness and loneliness.
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Date: 11/24/2014 8:02:00 AM
Oh that's wonderful Sara! U hv an amazing pen my dear friend!
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Date: 11/23/2014 6:39:00 PM
Ah yes, the tree does give off peaceful vibrations that fill the heart with joy! Nicely done.
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Date: 11/23/2014 4:34:00 PM
beautifully penned I've not seen this form before Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
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