Christmas Alone

room reverberates with silence a decorated Christmas tree
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Deschler Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 12:42 AM
A decorated tree can bring back those good memories when we feel alone at Christmastime... You've expressed so much in just these two short lines. Nice work, Sara!
Espinola Collins Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 2:48 PM
Well done...great title too! :)
Horne Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 3:22 PM
oh, such a sad one here - very good, though
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 6:03 PM
'wow, sara, I think you have really captured the essence of this form. I love this.
Carroll Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 12:07 PM
Nice reflective write Sara!
Anish Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 11:25 AM
Sad but sweet! Have a good Thanksgiving! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Callus Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 9:04 AM
This Monoku could have two different interpretations...one when I sit down alone and quietly admire my decorated tree....or else having Christmas tree and decorations ready, but no one to share them with. // paul
Sirak Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 8:33 AM
This little gem evokes such sadness and loneliness.
A. Sharma Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 8:02 AM
Oh that's wonderful Sara! U hv an amazing pen my dear friend!
Meade Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 6:39 PM
Ah yes, the tree does give off peaceful vibrations that fill the heart with joy! Nicely done.
Allison Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 4:34 PM
beautifully penned I've not seen this form before Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
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