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Alternating sleet and snow 
Bounced droplets against windows  
Children pressing noses on glass
December 24th, Christmas Eve at last
Excitement palpable all around
Flakes gently accumulating over ground
Gusts of wind creating snowdrifts fast
Holiday memories of Christmas's past
I am home for holidays this year
Jingle Bells sung loudly to all I hold dear
Kids again ask “Is it almost time?”
Leaving cookies and letter for Santa
Milk put on fireplace mantle
Naughty or nice all children in bed
On alert for Santa's reindeer and sled
Peace on earth whispers to God’s ear
Quiet prayers for those we hold dear
Rejoicing heard all over the world
Songs celebrating the birth of our Lord
True spirit of Christmas in many places
Universally in smiles on children’s faces
Volunteers and helpers know meaning
Wishing all Merry Christmas or singing
Xylophones for ladies and gents
Year-round giving with common sense 
Zealous patrons of generousness


Written 12-25-2015
Abecedarian Rhyme
Christmas Abecedarian Contest sponsored by Shadow Hamilton
2nd Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/3/2016 11:51:00 PM
you are sweet
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Date: 1/31/2016 11:01:00 PM
Susan, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LINDA -
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/1/2016 11:00:00 AM
Thanks so much Linda!!
Date: 1/24/2016 3:52:00 PM
SUSAN, Congrats on your Christmas Abecedarian win. **SKAT**
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/27/2016 1:21:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/24/2016 12:44:00 PM
A 7 for sure, Susan! congrats on your win. Janice
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/27/2016 1:20:00 AM
Thanks Janice. I really appreciate your opinion and that you came by.
Date: 1/24/2016 10:36:00 AM
Susan, this is such a well-done Abecedarian poem! Congratulations on your 2nd Place well-deserved win! 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/27/2016 1:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Sandra. Appreciate you reading and the compliments.
Date: 1/24/2016 6:16:00 AM
You did a fabulous job here with this challenging form:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/27/2016 1:17:00 AM
Thanks Jan. Appreciate this.
Date: 1/12/2016 7:57:00 AM
This is the only one I have read for the contest. Great use of the form. I have a hard time imagining a poem better done for this contest.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/13/2016 5:44:00 PM
Why thank you! It was fun to do.
Date: 12/30/2015 4:16:00 PM
Susan...Happy New Year ~LINDA~
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/30/2015 4:27:00 PM
Why thanks so much Linda! Happy New Year to you and yours. Be safe.
Date: 12/30/2015 5:55:00 AM
Really good abecedarian Susan, Merry Christmas to you and your family Best Wishes Kevin
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/30/2015 4:46:00 PM
Thank You! Happy New Year to you and yours. Be Safe!
Date: 12/29/2015 7:06:00 PM
Hi Susan: A well displayed Abcedarian poem! Definitely a winner!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/29/2015 8:49:00 PM
Why thank you very much!
Date: 12/29/2015 5:53:00 PM
You did a great job here, Susan. I suggest you coome up with a true X word (search Google) because Shadow is strict about people using a good X word!! (well maybe you did some kind of word with the X but not sure how it will be taken!!)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/29/2015 6:27:00 PM
Ahh Good to know! Yes it was a Greek X word for Christmas but it didn't copy over. I'll see if I can type it in to stay maybe. Thanks!
Date: 12/29/2015 3:55:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..These are not so easy to write but yours rhymes, has good flow and rhythm..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/29/2015 6:29:00 PM
Thanks so much Sara! Glad you stopped by and glad you commented. I enjoyed yours and will be back to read some more.
Date: 12/28/2015 10:57:00 PM
Very nicely penned Susan...best wishes in the contest
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/29/2015 5:58:00 AM
Thank you Joseph! Congrats on your big win.
Date: 12/28/2015 6:54:00 PM
This is wonderful...it catches all the images of Christmas and the final line is genius. Good Luck in the contest. SuZ
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/29/2015 5:57:00 AM
Thank you Suzanne! Very nice of you.

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