Christmas

 She arrives with a mystic charm
 Gliding in on silver moon
 With a peaceful vibe that oft disarms
 As words of praise in yuletide tunes
 Echo  where the stars are strewn

decemberquintain (english)

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Sara Kendrick

November 27, 2023 at 8:57 AM

Ahhh!! I am glad you shared this one with us. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my POTD with congratulations. Sara K

J Hamilton Gist

December 2, 2017 at 3:36 PM

And she has arrived hasn't she...Nice.

Connie Marcum Wong

November 21, 2017 at 11:29 PM

Free verse has to work very hard to surpass your rhyme Joseph! I loved this Quintain. Congratulations! I already faved this gem! : )

Debbie Duncan

November 21, 2017 at 11:22 PM

What a charming little verse, and an awesome win :)

Mark Woods

December 22, 2015 at 10:41 AM

I was just looking how to write a quintain and this wee beauty popped up in the examples. Magnificent poem

Kelly Deschler

January 9, 2015 at 12:31 AM

What a charming little rhyme this is, Joseph! Very nicely done!

John Fleming

January 7, 2015 at 12:21 PM

Excellent little verse, Joseph!! :) john.

Harry Horsman

January 6, 2015 at 10:57 AM

there's magic in everything we see Joseph i know, just read one...

Connie Marcum Wong

January 5, 2015 at 11:54 PM

THIS is BEAUTIFUL Joseph! Awesome imagery that has a spiritual feeling as well as a romantic one. Very impressive! I am fav'ing it.

Andrea Dietrich

January 5, 2015 at 11:25 PM

hey didn't you enter the season contest? Let me go see if you are on the winners' list.

Poet Destroyer A

January 4, 2015 at 5:39 PM

Joseph, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~

Carrie Richards

January 4, 2015 at 5:30 PM

Gliding in on a silver moon......(what a lovely thought that is !!) Lovely Quintain!! Congratulations Joseph !!

Jan Allison

January 4, 2015 at 4:03 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

January 4, 2015 at 3:20 PM

Joseph, congrats on your win! I felt the magic! Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

January 4, 2015 at 2:34 PM

this is indeed quite magical and beautiful. If I were not so picky about exact rhymes, it would have been in top three! Congrats, Joseph.

Donna Jones

January 4, 2015 at 2:24 PM

December for me..is always here before ya know it..you captured the magic of the season perfectly

M. L. Kiser

December 31, 2014 at 4:00 PM

True words about our last month of the year. Happy new year.

Paul Callus

December 30, 2014 at 10:24 AM

Very charming, and the imagery provides the perfect vibes. This easily beats my own entry! Wish you all the best! // paul

Paul Callus

January 4, 2015 at 3:08 PM

...back with congratulations, Joseph; very much deserved. // paul

Debbie Guzzi

December 29, 2014 at 8:30 AM

A fav for me! Light & Love & Happy New Year

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 29, 2014 at 4:53 AM

- A lovely poem, Joseph !!! - Always a pleasure to read your poems! - Thank you for the year 2014 - looking forward to a new year with my friends here at "soup" - Happy new year dear friend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)