''Christinas' Gift''

Channeled love meant not be forsaken.
      Hence thine words forgotten.
      Risk the tongue my anguished thoughts.
      Illusion,vision of mirage lay clear.
      Still in movement,thy eyes deceive me.
      Touched skin,sight enhanced.
      I felt a cold breeze on my neck.
      Noticed change in temperature as it dropped.
      Awakened by truth of life beyond death.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Foulk Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 8:49 PM
it was a great piece of beautiful well written poetry.
Greenlee Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 7:29 AM
had a hard time centering top line.frustrated about this.......
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