Christening

Baptized by the sun,
The leaves shake off drops of light:
Pasture’s sacrament.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chircop Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 10:19 PM
This gem........i love it,I love it all.. a fav....Charma
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 4:08 PM
wow, really good haiku here! thanks for the place, Raul. LUv, andrea
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May 5, 2010 at 1:49 PM
I really like how the title and the last line work together. Your talent shines in this poem. So much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing them with us and for choosing my poem as one of your contest winners. I am grateful for the opportunity. Karen
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May 5, 2010 at 1:07 PM
Spectacular Raul.. U never cease to amaze me with your words .. especially since u started the photo contests ..everyone has become exhilarated with excitement to create and keep on creating.. a simple thankxxx for my 2nd place for The Calm Before The Storm is not enough.. my gratitude is expressed to u by saying I appreciate your acknowledgment of my talent and I always enjoy participating in your contests... so keep bringing them on.. please.. sincerest thankxxx .. luv.. Linda-Marie
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May 5, 2010 at 1:00 PM
Raul, thanks again so much for running these contests. I am honored to be included with such talented individuals on your winners list. I find your contests challenging and engaging. Thanks again. Joe
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May 5, 2010 at 12:45 PM
This goes well with the other one you posted today. Very nice!
Kendrick Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 12:37 PM
Interesting thoughts that have come together in this one...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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