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Christening

Baptized by the sun, The leaves shake off drops of light: Pasture’s sacrament.

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/5/2010 10:19:00 PM

This gem........i love it,I love it all.. a fav....Charma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2010 4:08:00 PM

wow, really good haiku here! thanks for the place, Raul. LUv, andrea

Date: 5/5/2010 1:49:00 PM

I really like how the title and the last line work together. Your talent shines in this poem. So much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing them with us and for choosing my poem as one of your contest winners. I am grateful for the opportunity. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/5/2010 1:07:00 PM

Spectacular Raul.. U never cease to amaze me with your words .. especially since u started the photo contests ..everyone has become exhilarated with excitement to create and keep on creating.. a simple thankxxx for my 2nd place for The Calm Before The Storm is not enough.. my gratitude is expressed to u by saying I appreciate your acknowledgment of my talent and I always enjoy participating in your contests... so keep bringing them on.. please.. sincerest thankxxx .. luv.. Linda-Marie

Joe Flach

Date: 5/5/2010 1:00:00 PM

Raul, thanks again so much for running these contests. I am honored to be included with such talented individuals on your winners list. I find your contests challenging and engaging. Thanks again. Joe

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/5/2010 12:45:00 PM

This goes well with the other one you posted today. Very nice!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/5/2010 12:37:00 PM

Interesting thoughts that have come together in this one...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara