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Christened

first a glow and then a glisten like dawn, breaks forth sticky sweat an acolyte by solstice christened droplets form, then rivulets off the brow and in the eyes upper body soaking wet fown the back and to the waistline hasn’t reached the nethers yet coming down like salty rain next, there’s squeaking in the shoes showing shadows great disdain sun’s now turning up the screws

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Date: 7/20/2022 12:08:00 PM
Wow, FGS, find some air-conditioning quickly! I got uncomfortable just reading this even though I'm in a cool seventy-five degree room. Well, cool compared to outside!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/20/2022 5:15:00 PM
Indeed!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/20/2022 1:06:00 PM
I take LOTS of water breaks. Nice part about not being on anyone’s payroll!

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