Chores

All the chores to do Kitchen to clean, do laundry And then a bird sings

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George Zamalea

Date: 12/21/2012 10:23:00 PM

I love such simplicity and it makes us good.

Rollo West
Date: 12/22/2012 12:08:00 PM

Hello George, thank you so much for stopping by. Rollo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2012 6:31:00 PM

just LOVE it. the call of the outside and of more pleasurable things!!

Rollo West
Date: 12/20/2012 8:38:00 PM

Hi Andrea,thank you so much my friend for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/20/2012 11:20:00 AM

Those darn birds are so distracting. How did you explain to your wife that the chores didn't get finished???

Rollo West
Date: 12/20/2012 11:39:00 AM

Hello Richard, good one my friend, took my punishment like a man, lol. Rollo

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/20/2012 10:53:00 AM

Another good one Rollo zz

Rollo West
Date: 12/20/2012 10:56:00 AM

Hi Mandy, thank you so much for stopping by. Rollo

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/20/2012 1:47:00 AM

Those darn birds, it always happens when you must do some work, beauty escapes into the wild blue yonder! Brilliant write my friend, simple brilliant! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and entertaining poem this evening! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!

Rollo West
Date: 12/20/2012 10:44:00 AM

Hello Russell, thank you so much for stopping by my friend and commenting. Rollo