Choices Made



       hill of fallen snow
holding still but slippery
    precise choices made

Heidi Sands

2/8/25

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February 10, 2025 at 3:15 AM
“ holding still but slippery” that line speaks to me. Sometimes it isnt easy to hold onto choices made but its always good to still keep trying to stick to choices made! A deep and thought provoking poem. Pleasure reading you always! Sending you light always
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February 10, 2025 at 4:53 AM
Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate it. I hope you have a nice day :)
Tor Avatar
February 8, 2025 at 5:43 PM
Wishing you a win for the Contest Heidi...
Sands Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 3:59 AM
Oh, I hadn't looked at the contests. I just wrote it. Thanks Michael :)
Mckeithan Avatar
February 8, 2025 at 4:46 PM
Wonderful haiku. Excellent submission to the contest
Sands Avatar
February 8, 2025 at 5:36 PM
Thank you Oliver :)
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February 8, 2025 at 2:30 PM
Choices made submitted 2/8/25
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