Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

Choco-Mama Mania

Ooey, gooey, give me choc-o-lot!
If I must, I'll take it liquid hot,
But "wicked" like they fix it in Madrid,
Thick as porridge, satin sunburnt sweet.
(Not like here: sugar,milk and cocoa, mix and heat). 
Give me some hot chocolate I can eat!

Drip-drop-dripping from a spoon!
Give it -  give it to me in a box.
Tantalize my lips with luscious bits,
Rum and amaretto morsels dipped.
Give me it in chips or chunks or blocks.
And please not those from K-mart or the grocer.
We connoisseurs much prefer it kosher!

Give it to me Swiss or straight from France.
Hurry while I loosen up my pants!
I'll make do with anything you have.
Drizzled over ice-cream nice and smoothy.
chocolate is the universal salve.
chilled or warm, but slathered on it soothes me.

Make my ice-cream chocolate flavored too-
peanut butter swirls with fudge will do.
Be my ever sweet-tooth choco-fairy.
Finger-feed me bonbons. I'm your baby.
Feed me plump and succulent black berry.
Give me, give me, give me what I crave,
and I shall be your love-starved-choco-slave.

10/5/13
When I wrote this, it just flowed to me, like chocolate water; usually I have to sit and think a bit and poetry often does not flow from me in this way!

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Gregory Richard Barden December 6, 2018 at 7:03 PM Best wishes and sincere congrats on your win in Nina's contest, Andrea - blessings to you and yours for a joyous holiday season, my friend! :-)

Janice Canerdy December 6, 2018 at 6:47 PM CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Andrea! Janice

Curtis Moorman December 6, 2018 at 3:17 PM I ate so much chocolate I thought I just may croak I spent all my money Now I'm sitting home broke I'm suffering from withdrawal My Prozac is all gone I have no one to turn to So I'm home all alone But wait, here's my neighbor To see if I'm okay If they get me some chocolate I'll make it through the day

Lindsay Laurie March 18, 2016 at 1:21 AM Crikey Andrea ... my choco poem is nowhere as detailed as yours - terrific - Lindsay

Phyllis Babcock November 5, 2013 at 10:57 AM Now you have my mouth watering for some chocolate. Had over 50 kids for Halloween so all my candy went. A good thing to or otherwise I would be digging in. LOL Nice rich poem. love phyl

Linda Jackson November 1, 2013 at 2:52 PM I love this poem. A real chocoholic's delight. Best wishes Linda x

Skat A October 30, 2013 at 12:17 PM love it Andrea ....love <3 SKAT

Joseph May October 27, 2013 at 7:45 AM congrats on your win Andrea...thanks for the reply to my question....I always thought the apostrophe came after the s if it was possesive...hugs

Litan Dey October 27, 2013 at 1:06 AM This is a nice poem friend,Congratulation on your win

Poet Destroyer A October 26, 2013 at 9:21 PM Hello Andrea, , thank you for the support :-) CONGRATULATIONS, amazingly awesome win. Stop by my latest blog. If you's like or have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=17074&PoetID=18720 ------ always~ LINDA ~

Karen Anglesey October 13, 2013 at 8:12 PM Very clever and oozes with such passion for chocolate... :)

Richard D Seal October 12, 2013 at 8:57 PM YELP !!!!!! And I thought I was a teaser lol, you'd be amazed at the choco-thoughts dripping over the nuts and bolts in my head right now haha. Nice one Petal, nice one. Take care, Richard

Monterey Sirak October 10, 2013 at 9:38 AM This is a winner as far as I am concerned. It is early in the morning but now I want chocolate for breakfast!

Lucilla Carrillo October 7, 2013 at 11:27 PM Andrea; You are good. How you ever came up with this - I don't know. It will be a winner. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla Andrea Dietrich October 8, 2013 at 9:20 AM thanks you guys. The contest is judged and I lost in that one.

Suzanne Delaney October 7, 2013 at 10:57 PM You have such a gift with words...love this poem. Recently spent some time in Ireland. They have a dark chocolate with irish Whiskey...intensely yummy. This looks like a winner to me. Hugs SuZ

Charmaine Chircop October 7, 2013 at 2:53 AM Ow i know now why you are so sweet you are a choco holic of choco treat.Swiss are my favourite too .Dark or sweet..nutty or plain..Orange or white..anything will do..I really enjoyed the beat in this poem dear..Its pennedelicious : ) yumm

Robert Johnson October 6, 2013 at 9:43 PM What are you trying to say here. You like chocolate? :)

Kelly Deschler October 6, 2013 at 6:02 PM A very, very "sweet" poem, Andrea! This flows smoothly like hot fudge on a sundae! I love chocolate, and I loved this poem, too! Wonderful work! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you very much for the kind comments. And, thanks for adding my poem to your favorites. I truly appreciate it!

Joe Maverick October 6, 2013 at 2:15 AM I guess you'll have em licked, with such an intensly flavorsome slab of discriptive admiration for ' THE CHOCOLATE' well done Andrea..'

Matthew Anish October 5, 2013 at 11:24 PM What a tasty poem! I should be getting a new chapbook in the mail soon and will send you a copy.It would be great if you could send another of your books. I work (volunteer) at Poet'sHouse and have put your work on their website. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Saanvi Dua October 5, 2013 at 10:53 AM Yummm........ Pls don't tempt me , but you already have ........ wonderful poem ! do leave some chocolate for me too ! ........Saanvi

Daver Austin October 5, 2013 at 10:07 AM I am so BAD! I bought a big bag of Hershey kisses the other day and decided I would eat half a dozen. YOu guessed it. I snarfed down the whole bag. Next day I felt like hell. Will this cure my chocolate mania. Nope! Good and tantalizing write, dear friend. Love, daver

Delysia Hendricks October 5, 2013 at 8:30 AM hahaha. From one chocoholic to another: did your good mama not teach you choccies kill? You have me licking my lips here. Lovely verse, not to mention your smooth rhyming. You're sure to do well in the contest, my friend. Licia :-)

Bl Devnath October 5, 2013 at 7:50 AM Oh! a beautiful poem of Chocolate. After reading I feeling to enjoy a very tasty one, perhaps I will not be able to control myself with out it. If not certainly I will see in dream. Excellent beauty of taste. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Donna Jones October 4, 2013 at 10:23 PM This had a nice beat to it Andrea....had Congo drums going off in my head and an umbrella drink..haha...loved it!!!!!!

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