Home » Poems » Jan Allison » Chocolate Footles For Fun

Jan Allison | + Follow Poet |

Chocolate Footles For Fun

Big bite Delight Last chunk Heart sunk Fat tum Feel glum Big thighs She cries Buy more From store 20th August 2014

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Roy Jerden

Date: 8/22/2014 4:12:00 PM

Been there, I swear, done that, now fat. Good luck. Cheers, Roy

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2014 4:14:00 PM

LOL Roy. i love the way other people join in the fun with these simple little rhymes :-) Thanks for dropping by. Hugs jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/22/2014 3:52:00 AM

Loool Jan :) you really love chocolates I bet you have them always at home..:) you make me feel a child always asking for it..:)!!! Witty one!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2014 4:26:00 AM

I can't believe it but we still have chocolate left over from Christmas... I must be ill! hugs jan xxxx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/21/2014 8:09:00 AM

This is delicious fun.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 9:30:00 AM

Oh it is Richard and I have had such fun creating these footle poems and i can't stop writing them now just for fun:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/20/2014 10:30:00 PM

if not for chocolate then what. this must be a great footle. you got me craving just a bite or even a taste. lots of love.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 2:16:00 AM

I don't smoke rarely drink ... but can't resist plain chocolate LOL - not addicted but some days I simply MUST have it :-) Hugs jan xxx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/20/2014 5:00:00 PM

Who can resist chocolate..Even if my thighs and tum get fat.. I will go on a diet but never quit chocolate: )..Grt footle on my favourite topic.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2014 5:04:00 PM

OH me too Charmaine some days I have to have chocolate - most days with a Y in them LOl Hugs Jan xxx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/20/2014 4:58:00 PM

Hi Jan..This silly ad ons to my avatar are just for you and other two friends.I felt you a bit down..So hope I make you smile..big hug : )

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 8/20/2014 5:16:00 PM

I could feel you were down is what I mean..Glad you are on your way up sweet lady..: )Goodnight xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2014 5:02:00 PM

LOL Thanks Charmaine I have been but am on the way up now - love the avatar LOL Hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 8/20/2014 1:35:00 PM

Oh I love these Jan! I am not a chocolate eater, but I enjoy a piece of dark chocolate now and again. :)) paul

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2014 1:42:00 PM

My dad is diabetic but loves eating plain chocolate - then again in his condition its not going to do any harm bless him - i bought him 10 bars for his birthday LOL Hugs Jan xxxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/20/2014 1:11:00 PM

hahah, great! I have been living off of chocolate today, four houses I delivered to gave me and abby either candy or cookies, so funny. I ate most of it though and gave her an apple :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2014 1:18:00 PM

Well done Casarah! protecting your lovely daughter from the perils of Candy LOL Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/20/2014 12:54:00 PM

melt mouth...now south......sweet tooth...the truth......love them Jan....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2014 1:03:00 PM

LOL Tim you need to start writing them down too:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/20/2014 12:47:00 PM

- I must admit that I am a "chocolate lover" :))) - Buy more - From store !!! - Yummy... - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2014 1:02:00 PM

oh me too especially very dark plain chocolate - they say it's good for you - i won't argue that one too much LOL Hugs jan xxx

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/20/2014 12:27:00 PM

These little verses are addictive. Chocolate cannot be beat.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2014 1:01:00 PM

I agree to both those statement Faye:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 8/20/2014 12:20:00 PM

Yeah, why stop right? Enjoyed!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2014 12:21:00 PM

LOL I love chocolate - and some days I simply HAVE to have it... in fact most days ending in Y LOL Hugs jan xxx