Chocolate Footles For Fun

Big bite
Delight

Last chunk
Heart sunk

Fat tum
Feel glum

Big thighs
She cries

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20th August 2014
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Jerden Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 4:12 PM
Been there, I swear, done that, now fat. Good luck. Cheers, Roy
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 4:14 PM
LOL Roy. i love the way other people join in the fun with these simple little rhymes :-) Thanks for dropping by. Hugs jan xxx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 3:52 AM
Loool Jan :) you really love chocolates I bet you have them always at home..:) you make me feel a child always asking for it..:)!!! Witty one!
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 4:26 AM
I can't believe it but we still have chocolate left over from Christmas... I must be ill! hugs jan xxxx
Lamoureux Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 8:09 AM
This is delicious fun.
Allison Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 9:30 AM
Oh it is Richard and I have had such fun creating these footle poems and i can't stop writing them now just for fun:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 10:30 PM
if not for chocolate then what. this must be a great footle. you got me craving just a bite or even a taste. lots of love.
Allison Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 2:16 AM
I don't smoke rarely drink ... but can't resist plain chocolate LOL - not addicted but some days I simply MUST have it :-) Hugs jan xxx
Chircop Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 5:00 PM
Who can resist chocolate..Even if my thighs and tum get fat.. I will go on a diet but never quit chocolate: )..Grt footle on my favourite topic.
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 5:04 PM
OH me too Charmaine some days I have to have chocolate - most days with a Y in them LOl Hugs Jan xxx
Chircop Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 4:58 PM
Hi Jan..This silly ad ons to my avatar are just for you and other two friends.I felt you a bit down..So hope I make you smile..big hug : )
Chircop Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 5:16 PM
I could feel you were down is what I mean..Glad you are on your way up sweet lady..: )Goodnight xxx
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 5:02 PM
LOL Thanks Charmaine I have been but am on the way up now - love the avatar LOL Hugs jan xxx
Callus Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:35 PM
Oh I love these Jan! I am not a chocolate eater, but I enjoy a piece of dark chocolate now and again. :)) paul
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:42 PM
My dad is diabetic but loves eating plain chocolate - then again in his condition its not going to do any harm bless him - i bought him 10 bars for his birthday LOL Hugs Jan xxxx
Nance Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:11 PM
hahah, great! I have been living off of chocolate today, four houses I delivered to gave me and abby either candy or cookies, so funny. I ate most of it though and gave her an apple :)
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:18 PM
Well done Casarah! protecting your lovely daughter from the perils of Candy LOL Hugs Jan xxx
Smith Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 12:54 PM
melt mouth...now south......sweet tooth...the truth......love them Jan....hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:03 PM
LOL Tim you need to start writing them down too:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 12:47 PM
- I must admit that I am a "chocolate lover" :))) - Buy more - From store !!! - Yummy... - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:02 PM
oh me too especially very dark plain chocolate - they say it's good for you - i won't argue that one too much LOL Hugs jan xxx
Gibson Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 12:27 PM
These little verses are addictive. Chocolate cannot be beat.
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:01 PM
I agree to both those statement Faye:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Harrell Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 12:20 PM
Yeah, why stop right? Enjoyed!
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 12:21 PM
LOL I love chocolate - and some days I simply HAVE to have it... in fact most days ending in Y LOL Hugs jan xxx
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