Chocolate

As I fly around on a mystical journey
Munching on Kit Kat's and Curly Wurly's
I start to hear an 8-bit rendition
Of Joy's Division's tune Transmission
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 10:01 PM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 1:17 PM
SAMUEL, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT **
Mehta Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 3:22 PM
Creative and interesting expressions, Samuel
Brown Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 4:05 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Samuel. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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July 4, 2011 at 8:21 PM
Welcome to the soup Samuel. My favorite subject and treat. More PLease
Lineberger Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 7:43 PM
welcome to PoetrySoup :) loved the poem!
Wesley Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 6:42 PM
Great verse and rhyme, welcome to Soup, hoope you enjoy the experience here.
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