Chlor Ide-For Maureen Mcgreavy
more reen
i miss sting
ing in my
red eyes
from perhaps
too much swim
ming in your
poetry
but i did try
wearing googles
and it was worse
then google
every word had
a sales tag on
something special
but i didn't especially
like that much
i just want to
as crazy as it
might sound
touch your words
for i know that
every word
choosen
is not
darwinian
selection of
the strongest
and fittest but
how you choose
the perfect word
though awkwardly
fits
the
finish
of your
poem
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