Chit Chattering

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music in the trees
gossips teem in green bowers
marigolds abuzz

cracker butterflies
among burgundy roses
twittering away

hollyhocks abuzz
with news of the honeybee
such blues pinks and blacks

crickets go screaming
near the endless babbling brook
in the orange dusk

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/20/2021 1:36:00 AM

Nature at its best. ~~

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/20/2021 9:42:00 AM

Thank you for saying so. :=)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/19/2021 5:57:00 PM

I like the way you've tied together these haikus with 'gossip, twitter, news, and babble' -- truly the 'chit-chat' of our day and age... Of course, it is we who attribute it to mother nature and fellow creatures. Far as I know, they've been off their devices for eons! Smiles, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/19/2021 8:02:00 PM

I absolutely appreciate your glowing remarks, Gershon. Animals have so many different means of communicating, that I find it fascinating. Well, as they say, variety is the spice of life. :=) Evelyn