Chiron

the stamp of hooves, 
why doesn't he move.
this is it,
it all comes to this.
the epocaliptic fight, 
is here at midnight.
why doesn't he fire,
isn't this his desire.
will we survive,
this is being written live.
kronos rises.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 24, 2013 at 6:27 PM
Hi Carla, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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September 21, 2013 at 6:51 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Carla ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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September 21, 2013 at 5:21 AM
Carla, -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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September 21, 2013 at 3:31 AM
I love what I write and it gives me great pleasure for others to read what I enjoy. I love mythology and write my own myths. hope you like this
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