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chipmunk plays

Could be either senryu or haiku

chipmunk plays on drive enjoying trees verdant shade.... mother's day plant waits
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Elliott Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 2:01 PM
A charming sentry, Sara. Very lovely. We have a chipmunk in the backyard living midst the squirrels and birds. He comes right by me when I’m sitting on the patio. Besides birdseed, we put out critter feed and the squirrels and chipmunks are in their glory thrilled about that. Blessings and hugs to you. :)
Kendrick Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 4:10 PM
Regina, I like squirrels and chipmunks if they are away from my house because they will get into a house and can cause havoc with electrical wiring and other things. They do eat birdseed that I put out for the birds, but I would discourage them from eating it if I could. I only see a squirrel occasionally, but I am sure there ar those that I can't see out there. Thank you for your visit and uplifting comments ..Sara K.
Carmack Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 7:48 AM
One of my favorite rodents.
Kendrick Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 4:48 PM
Rob, they are interesting to watch run, play and disappear down a chipmunk hole so to speak. Your visit was delightful. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 5:13 AM
Those varmints are out and about! Saw 5 squirrels playing in my yard yesterday.
Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 10:17 AM
Kim, they can be fun to watch and also horrible if they get in an attic. Thank you for dropping by and leaving such a nice review. Sara K.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 12:53 AM
Aw, I do love chipmunks, we don't have any here. Lovely poem of a Mother's Day moment, the plant waiting for the recipient I'm guessing :) I hope you had a blessed day Sara <3
Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 4:27 AM
I haven't been up long, BJ., but I am receiving your blessings for this day to be blessed. Thank you for dropping by. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 9:38 PM
A first rate senyru, Sara. Your word choice I particularily love. Each line a joy. Hopefully you had a lovely Mother’s Day. Howard
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 5:30 AM
Thank you, Howard. I had some nice times with the family leading up to Mother's Day. I appreciate the visit and nice review. Sara K.
Onclaud Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 5:14 PM
when chipmunk plays, can the flowers wait? happy mother's day, sara...
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 5:30 AM
Nette, yes, those flowers want their fair share of the fun. Your visit was uplifting. Sara K.
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 2:00 PM
The last line is great for a haiku. Hope you had a nice Mother's Day
Kendrick Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 4:23 PM
Well, my Mother's Day was a stay-at-home day for me with Cody. One daughter took me out for lunch on Saturday and the other took me out on the Wednesday before Mother's Day. My son called me on Saturday a week before Mother's Day. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 8:03 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun write.  Chipmunk sure do like to play. Pretty Flowers... Have a great day writing away...........
Kendrick Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 10:00 AM
Paula, your visit was delightful. Sara K
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