Chinky Eyes

sparkling brightly ,
                       chinky-eyed pretty lady
                        tearful eyes last night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Tidd Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 9:55 AM
Dark, mysterious pools of bold obsidian pull the viewer in.
Torres Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 9:58 AM
thank you for the visit and comment, Jim!!! :))
Byte Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 5:11 PM
Good wish you were closer I would be a friend you have never had to help with all the pain you are feeling. Just remember smile and people will wonder what you been up to. Your dearest soup friend Michael xoxo
Torres Avatar
January 6, 2014 at 9:06 AM
thank you for the friendship...you guyz are so kind to me..THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! :))
Andresen Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 12:26 PM
- Smile my sweet friend :) - sad thoughts in your haiku, but good ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Torres Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 12:38 PM
Thank you, Anne-lise..:)) just sharing the world what i've been through..^__^
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