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Chinese Rose

I was taken captive by an amazing Chinese rose She is very far away, but it seemed close In the land of fantasy,was born a powerful illusion Against a beautiful dream, powerlessly of preclusion

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Date: 2/27/2018 12:20:00 PM
Wow! a beautiful verse Hai Hon
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Hai Hon
Date: 2/27/2018 1:06:00 PM
Thank you! Illusory love is the cause of really written poetry.)
Date: 2/14/2018 4:39:00 AM
Beautiful language and really a good read. The images you used were really stunning.
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Date: 2/14/2018 4:35:00 AM
Very powerful words. Paints a clear image and it was lovely to read.
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Date: 2/14/2018 5:47:00 AM
I'm very grateful for the aesthetic review, which should encourage me to write something better.)

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