Hai Hon Poet Romanticism

Chinese Rose

I was taken captive by an amazing Chinese rose
She is very far away, but it seemed close
In the land of fantasy,was born a powerful illusion 
Against a beautiful dream, powerlessly of preclusion

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Eve Roper February 27, 2018 at 12:20 PM Wow! a beautiful verse Hai Hon Hai Hon February 27, 2018 at 1:06 PM Thank you! Illusory love is the cause of really written poetry.)

Jacqueline Van Der Wath February 14, 2018 at 4:39 AM Beautiful language and really a good read. The images you used were really stunning.

Jacqueline Van Der Wath February 14, 2018 at 4:35 AM Very powerful words. Paints a clear image and it was lovely to read. Hai Hon February 14, 2018 at 5:47 AM I'm very grateful for the aesthetic review, which should encourage me to write something better.)