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Poetic Form: Political Verse
Inspired: February 29  
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(Medley: My Countries 'Tis O Thee) My countries misery creeps and all losers be of thee, I cringe And where our fathers lied and pilgrims took their hide numb every mouth inside ... with the syringe The natives can't be free and nobody can flee my aim right on Guided by box of tricks white hoods all pedophiles shot with their fractured ribs high caliber Sweat oozing felonies corrupt authorities asylums for Their morals run away regret that either take sweatshops where riots break noose round swan song And where our fathers lied and pilgrims took their hide numb every mouth inside ... with the syringe.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 3/2/2024 7:26:00 AM
Powerful expressions and the refrain adds depth to your poem..
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Hilo Poet
Date: 3/2/2024 9:11:00 AM
Tho it's an American medley, I included all three superpowers in the oddity melee, Silent One. I appreciate your timely sharing, my friend. Aloha, William
Date: 3/1/2024 5:09:00 AM
I loved how your poem unfolded as well as its physical structure...those last three words still echo in my mind. Nicely done! have a great day, sara
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Hilo Poet
Date: 3/1/2024 6:15:00 AM
Depicting the superpowers using a U.S. medley highlights my point of view outlined as an added draw. Again, my thanks, Sara. Aloha, William

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