Chilly Reception

Oh, jacket-face with zipper tugged tight,
please offer your brilliance. Share your light!
I beg your leg to tap indignant
to halt that spread of ice malignant:
rattle those cells to agitation
or watch me snap from such stagnation!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Henderson Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 11:44 AM
John this could be really deep. Reading it cold without knowing your meaning, I can see several ways to go with it. Very good write. Charles
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August 16, 2010 at 11:42 AM
Stopping by to wish you a wonderful inspiration filled week. I enjoyed reading your poetry today, thank you for sharing it John W. Love, Carol
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