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Chilly Chandeliers - For Contest

Chilly Chandeliers 


Moth-like flakes danced around the streetlights
swaying in rhythm with the wind


11/11/2016

submitted to – SNOW – Poetry contest

Copyright © John Lawless | Year Posted 2016

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November 16, 2016 at 8:57 AM

Very nice, John! Congrats!

November 15, 2016 at 5:32 PM

such a wonderful picture in so few words John:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

November 15, 2016 at 9:45 AM

Wonderful imagery dear John:-)Congrats :-) love, Anu:)

November 15, 2016 at 12:21 PM

Thank you Anu

November 15, 2016 at 9:03 AM

A lovely vision in your Crystalline poem, John. Congrats on your podium win! Sandra

November 15, 2016 at 12:20 PM

Thank you Sandra

November 15, 2016 at 7:27 AM

There is always some kind of activity going on around a streetlight, John! Yours makes a lovely picture. Congrats on your podium win. Regards // paul

November 15, 2016 at 12:20 PM

often times the perception of the scene is the result of it being filtered through the heart of the onlooker. Thanks for stopping by to comment Paul.

Andrea Dietrich

November 14, 2016 at 8:40 PM

this creates such a beautiful picture. BIG congrats on the win.

November 15, 2016 at 12:19 PM

Thanks Andrea...

Carrie Richards

November 14, 2016 at 8:20 PM

I love this !! The title is so perfect too !! Beautiful, John !! Congratulations!

November 15, 2016 at 12:18 PM

Thank you Carrie, always nice to hear from you.

November 11, 2016 at 11:20 AM

such wonderful imagery John:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

November 15, 2016 at 12:17 PM

Thanks Jan, my very visual mind often collaborates with the muse and .....TA-DA....ZEE POEM....

November 11, 2016 at 10:49 AM

beautiful visuals so fluidly crafted, john..huggs

November 15, 2016 at 12:17 PM

Nette, your comment reads like poetry....thank you.

November 11, 2016 at 10:31 AM

Beautiful John. Moth-like snowflakes. I like that a lot. Good luck in the contest.

November 15, 2016 at 12:16 PM

Hey Chris thanks for checking in again, appreciate the support

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