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A Triolet To Make My Day Poetry Contest- Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

Chills On The Lake- Triolet

As sunlight slides behind the hill 
And shadows start to disappear 
My body feels a soothing chill 
As sunlight slides behind the hill 
Reflections on the lake sit still 
The moon glows on the waters glare 
As sunlight slides behind the hill 
And shadows start to disappear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kauffman Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 12:28 PM
Congrats and high fives, Charlie! I love the picture of sitting by a lake watching the moonrise! You have captured such serenity in your words. Blessings my friend!
Kendrick Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 4:22 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Andrea's contest. Way to go. Sara K.
Messina Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 2:24 AM
Thank you, Sara.
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 1:10 AM
Hi Charles. This was very good except for glare not rhyming with disappear. Loved the imagery and the sweetness of this triolet . congrats and thanks for participating
Messina Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 2:23 AM
Andrea, Oops! Thank you so much for my placement in your contest. Much appreciated!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 4:51 PM
engaging imagery. I sensed peace as I read your poem. Best wishes with this contest entry....wishing you well.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 8:50 AM
I  enjoyed reading your wonderful "Chills On The Lake- Triolet" write. "Good Luck" Have a creative/fun day writing away..............
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