Chill of Showers

With showers lashing down on bushy trees,
limp boughs grow thin as light dims
on heaps of chilling leaves.


For Amy Green, Kimo Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 3:30 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
Palmer Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 9:29 AM
nice write Norma,best of luck in the contest
Callus Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 5:41 PM
Lovely kimo, though it gives you the chills! // paul
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