Cory Long Poet Senryu

Child's Life

Daughter’s heart of love
The twinkle in a child's eye
Give out hugs to share.

The cries of a child
The violence in the streets
Watch a child's heart break.

Michael's contest
what makes you smile what makes you frown.

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Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2012 at 3:00 PM Awesome win, Cory. Congratulations to you!

Poet Destroyer A September 5, 2012 at 7:39 PM Cory. , congratulations, with your senryu in Michael's "Smiles & Frown" contest.. God Bless~PD

Carol Sunshine Brown September 5, 2012 at 5:25 AM Congratulations on the super win in Michael's contest Cory. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud September 3, 2012 at 2:04 PM a deep and well crafted piece that deserves a win, cory.. congrats, congrats!..:) huggs!

Gwendolen Song September 3, 2012 at 12:54 PM Cory, today is your daughter's bday, right? Well, Happy Bday to her and congrats to u on this mighty fine senryu...I find these contrasting senryu very well written! 3 cheers for YOU! gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi September 3, 2012 at 9:45 AM Very personal images..thank you for sharing you :) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 3, 2012 at 9:08 AM congrats cory on a brilliant write and win .. amazing lines luv ..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 3, 2012 at 6:56 AM Congratulations Cory, well done xx

Michael J. Falotico September 3, 2012 at 6:55 AM Congrats Cory on your win in my contest!! Michael

Harry Horsman August 21, 2012 at 8:14 AM Oh yes, Cory this gets the senses going, wonderful Senryu. good luck.