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Child's Life

Daughter’s heart of love The twinkle in a child's eye Give out hugs to share.
The cries of a child The violence in the streets Watch a child's heart break.
Michael's contest what makes you smile what makes you frown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/6/2012 3:00:00 PM
Awesome win, Cory. Congratulations to you!
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Date: 9/5/2012 7:39:00 PM
Cory. , congratulations, with your senryu in Michael's "Smiles & Frown" contest.. God Bless~PD
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Date: 9/5/2012 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations on the super win in Michael's contest Cory. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2012 2:04:00 PM
a deep and well crafted piece that deserves a win, cory.. congrats, congrats!..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/3/2012 12:54:00 PM
Cory, today is your daughter's bday, right? Well, Happy Bday to her and congrats to u on this mighty fine senryu...I find these contrasting senryu very well written! 3 cheers for YOU! gwendolen
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Date: 9/3/2012 9:45:00 AM
Very personal images..thank you for sharing you :) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 9/3/2012 9:08:00 AM
congrats cory on a brilliant write and win .. amazing lines luv ..
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Date: 9/3/2012 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations Cory, well done xx
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Date: 9/3/2012 6:55:00 AM
Congrats Cory on your win in my contest!! Michael
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Date: 8/21/2012 8:14:00 AM
Oh yes, Cory this gets the senses going, wonderful Senryu. good luck.
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