Child's giddy afternoon

Handful of joy and laughter
Down to the cracker jacks surprise toy
Box of caramel candied popcorn



Wordku:  5-7-5 words

AP: 1st place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 3:45 AM
Darling! High spirited. A tribute to childhood!
Gauthier Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 8:48 AM
Love picturing kids sitting on the dock with their feet in the water... little minnows trying to get a nibble.
Rose  Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 4:43 PM
Your haikus are always a big surprise, kinda like the ones I found in a cracker jack box when I was little. I remember, nice one girl, take care
Gauthier Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 5:04 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Pixie. Much appreciated.
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