Children Thoughts

Children thoughts fire
Sparkling happiness high
Hopes and dream reach sky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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K. Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 4:44 AM
this is such an uplifting haiku Jessica :) especially enjoyed your 2nd line :) -- nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 12:09 AM
THis is really nice! LUv, Andrea
Rich Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 1:46 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.
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July 1, 2010 at 10:41 PM
well done on the thoughts, its true how a kids face lights up and so does the sky. Enjoyed Jessica, have a nice one,..p.d.
Mehta Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 6:55 PM
A wonderful write on the fireworks. Good luck in the contest
Mehta Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 8:04 AM
A nice haiku with good images. Good luck in the contest
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