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Children Clap and Laugh

Up above the sky  		
                                 Sounds of Flight covers the cloud 		
                                         Children clap and laugh

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2012 10:01:00 PM

this one I really like . It's cute image of kids watching a plane overhead.

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 4/22/2012 3:36:00 PM

I love the mental image here bl!!!

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/22/2012 3:41:00 PM

Thanks my friend for your comment, loved bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/22/2012 1:39:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one today..Interesting scene that you have so painted..Those flights create some clouds of their own..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment...Sara

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/22/2012 1:55:00 PM

Many thanks for giving time to read my writee, loved always, bl