Childlike

I nnocent of eye N oble of spirit N aif in outlook O pen of heart C andid of tongue E mpty of deceit N atural in nature C ourteous in manner E nquiring of mind

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Sharon Winter

Date: 7/16/2008 5:20:00 AM

Yes, wonderful acrostic. We learn so much from our children. Brian, I am having technical trouble entering member contests and am waiting to hear back from PS, otherwise I would have entered your contest already. Hope they get back to me soon. Have a great day. Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/16/2008 4:43:00 AM

The acrostic form is perfect while the message of innocence comes through truthfully and clearly with your words. Have a great day my friend and thank you for you welcome comments. Michael

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 7/16/2008 3:37:00 AM

Yes, if only people could keep that part of them alive most of the time...thank goodness for my kids to keep my inner child alive! Love Kristin