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"Shoebox dollhouse"--image from pinterest.com

poem submitted to “What’s With the Box” poetry contest, Nette Onclaud, sponsor, 4/29/2026

CHILDHOOD SHOEBOX

cardboard cathedral, fortress of dust~ 
you held a kingdom where spoons became swords.

you turned nothing into everything: 
a dollhouse, a toy soldier’s battlefield.

beneath beds, you gathered ghosts and were  
keeper of marbles that were small planets
and feathers with memories of wishes.

you were proof- childhood fits in a 13x8 shoebox.
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 3:18 PM
Your "CHILDHOOD SHOEBOX" is a fun/creative write with a great last line. Great/Fun Picture... Love Both... "Good Luck" I did, MYSTERY SHOEBOX." Have a fun day writing away.............
Ball Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 1:27 AM
Lovely Sara. Shoe boxes are indeed a child's treasure chest. Well done. God Bless, JB
Hind Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 10:23 PM
beautiful
Achara Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 7:35 PM
Love this one!
Gauthier Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 7:18 PM
Love how you follow your title with "cardboard cathedral" ~ wow !! What a lovely poem !
Rolland Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 3:16 PM
touching poetry, memories are precious when becoming older, enjoyed
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