Childhood Obesity

Mom would say to sit and eat veggie and fruits while going out Dad would say talk not at all with the mouth full-daily tortures The child hood excessive fatness was not part of daily cant.
+++++++ *Was meant for Sijo strings contest but did not enter as it was off the theme of the contest* June 3, 2014 Form Sijo Dr. Ram Mehta Contest No.7 by Linda
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A   Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 10:45 PM
Dr Ram,, I'm passing by to say hi, and thank you for the reply, you left on the comment I left below... XOX~ LINDA
Raj Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 3:53 AM
Congrats on the win Dr Ramji, Namaste.
Deschler Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 1:12 AM
Congratulations on a nice win, Dr. Ram!
Dey Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 12:25 PM
Congrats on Your win.
Guzzi Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 7:55 PM
Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love
Callus Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 5:38 AM
Intelligent sijo, Dr Ram. Obesity is not always people's fault, but for sure it is not intended to promote help healthy living. Congrats on your win. // paul
Kimathi Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 1:38 AM
A wonderful write and win Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
A   Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 8:42 PM
DR RAM.. Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting one of my many contests. I enjoyed every entry! If you like, stop by my latest blog "Never Say Never or my newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact here on this site. Always & Forever ~LINDA
Mehta Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 5:08 AM
Thanks for the appreciation, Linda
Kendrick Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 10:31 AM
Interesting work..Reads like winning material to me..There are many reasons to obesity than just what passes through the mouth..Thanks for your visit..Sara
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