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Child At Play

Laughter from his room Sunshine, the smell of cut grass Memories, good life

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Skat A

Date: 12/31/2010 7:07:00 PM

Tommy, congrats on your featured poem of the week. Hope you are enjoying the new year. May you be blessed with a wonderful & joyful New Year! Take care*Luv~SKAT

Daver Austin

Date: 12/30/2010 8:01:00 AM

Simple and sensory. Like it. Congrats on the selection. Dave

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/27/2010 9:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Tommy. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/26/2010 9:06:00 PM

Congrats Tommy on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all with luv..

Date: 12/26/2010 4:26:00 PM

Great poem! Great job! Keep it up!

Sunflower Poetess

Date: 12/16/2010 7:26:00 PM

Tis the good life sounds like to me. Loving the good life. Glenna

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 12/16/2010 5:48:00 PM

Hello Tommy, Welcome to Poetry Soup and Thank you for this lovely Haiku. Wonderful read As Always, Shar