Child At Play

Laughter from his room
        Sunshine, the smell of cut grass
             Memories, good life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 31, 2010 at 7:07 PM
Tommy, congrats on your featured poem of the week. Hope you are enjoying the new year. May you be blessed with a wonderful & joyful New Year! Take care*Luv~SKAT
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December 30, 2010 at 8:01 AM
Simple and sensory. Like it. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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December 27, 2010 at 9:13 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Tommy. Love, Carol
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December 26, 2010 at 9:06 PM
Congrats Tommy on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all with luv..
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December 26, 2010 at 4:26 PM
Great poem! Great job! Keep it up!
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December 16, 2010 at 7:26 PM
Tis the good life sounds like to me. Loving the good life. Glenna
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December 16, 2010 at 5:48 PM
Hello Tommy, Welcome to Poetry Soup and Thank you for this lovely Haiku. Wonderful read As Always, Shar
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