Chicks Critique Bunnys Work
Two chicks were sent to scope out what the rabbit had done.
He was losing it a bit, having weird ideas about what is fun.
The chicks found eggs hidden in the grass, which was good.
But the rabbit had also hid them under a pile of wood.
Those eggs were all smashed up oozing out candy of course.
He had also hidden some under the hooves of a horse.
Might have to appoint a new Easter Bunny the chicks reported.
To get the eggs under the haymow, he must have been seriously contorted.
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