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Chickens

brrk brrk brrk buc buc buc burk nice chicken, buc buc buc brk brK BURKuRK Mean CHICKEN! The littles pet my mouth as I say the brrks Recoiling with delight when mean chicken gives them fright.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 10/29/2014 10:04:00 AM
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I love grooks, chickens and rooks. Your "mean chicken" is incredible even if it does not mean anything and buc buc bucs all thru morning. I enjoyed your poem. Love and welcome to PS----- RAJAT
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Dan Helppi
Date: 10/29/2014 8:54:00 PM
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Thanks Rajat!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 10/27/2014 1:04:00 PM
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Nice write somewhat personified Dan... Enjoyed... Verlena
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Dan Helppi
Date: 10/27/2014 3:45:00 PM
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Glad.
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Cona Adams
Date: 10/27/2014 8:15:00 AM
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Having been raised with chickens, this resonates with me. I could see them. I'm laughing with you.
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Dan Helppi
Date: 10/27/2014 8:16:00 AM
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I am glad you are laughing!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/26/2014 9:05:00 PM
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I really like this. It is an unfamiliar form, but who cares as long as I enjoy reading it.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/26/2014 9:34:00 PM
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Not at all Dan. I think it is good to explore styles. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem.
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Dan Helppi
Date: 10/26/2014 9:23:00 PM
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Sorry about the form Maurice, I just went off the sound, Grook sounded like a chicken to me. I don't mean to be irreverent.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/25/2014 9:06:00 AM
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I can picture this, if chickens spot blood on another chicken they all peck the poor chicken to death.
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Dan Helppi
Date: 10/26/2014 9:26:00 PM
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We humans can be as cruel. But in my take the poem describes a game I play with my little ones with me as the chickens and my mouth as the beak.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/20/2014 4:15:00 PM
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cute one!! and welcome here to Soup.
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Dan Helppi
Date: 10/26/2014 9:27:00 PM
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Thanks and thanks!
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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 10/19/2014 10:15:00 PM
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Chicken to kitchens,good pening.
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Dan Helppi
Date: 10/26/2014 9:21:00 PM
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Thanks Muhammad!

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