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Chickens

brrk brrk brrk
buc buc buc burk
nice chicken,

buc buc buc
brk brK BURKuRK
Mean CHICKEN!

The littles pet my mouth
as I say the brrks
Recoiling with delight 
when mean chicken 
gives them fright.

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 10/29/2014 10:04:00 AM I love grooks, chickens and rooks. Your "mean chicken" is incredible even if it does not mean anything and buc buc bucs all thru morning. I enjoyed your poem. Love and welcome to PS----- RAJAT Login to Reply Dan Helppi Date: 10/29/2014 8:54:00 PM Thanks Rajat!

Verlena S. Walker Date: 10/27/2014 1:04:00 PM Nice write somewhat personified Dan... Enjoyed... Verlena Login to Reply Dan Helppi Date: 10/27/2014 3:45:00 PM Glad.

Cona Adams Date: 10/27/2014 8:15:00 AM Having been raised with chickens, this resonates with me. I could see them. I'm laughing with you. Login to Reply Dan Helppi Date: 10/27/2014 8:16:00 AM I am glad you are laughing!

Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/26/2014 9:05:00 PM I really like this. It is an unfamiliar form, but who cares as long as I enjoy reading it. Login to Reply Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/26/2014 9:34:00 PM Not at all Dan. I think it is good to explore styles. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Dan Helppi Date: 10/26/2014 9:23:00 PM Sorry about the form Maurice, I just went off the sound, Grook sounded like a chicken to me. I don't mean to be irreverent.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/25/2014 9:06:00 AM I can picture this, if chickens spot blood on another chicken they all peck the poor chicken to death. Login to Reply Dan Helppi Date: 10/26/2014 9:26:00 PM We humans can be as cruel. But in my take the poem describes a game I play with my little ones with me as the chickens and my mouth as the beak.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/20/2014 4:15:00 PM cute one!! and welcome here to Soup. Login to Reply Dan Helppi Date: 10/26/2014 9:27:00 PM Thanks and thanks!

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen Date: 10/19/2014 10:15:00 PM Chicken to kitchens,good pening. Login to Reply Dan Helppi Date: 10/26/2014 9:21:00 PM Thanks Muhammad!