Chez Old Nick

The flaming pyre
And tortured screams;
Regrets and curses
And broken dreams.

The piles of gold,
With fags* and booze;
The lust and orgies: 
So much to choose…

*cigarettes

For PD’s To Hell and Back contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 11:37 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "To Hell And Back" contest Jack. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 1:27 PM
jack, congrats on your win, love it...David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 8:23 AM
Congratulations , liked it first time xx
Rozario Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 8:22 AM
Congrats on your win Jack
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August 4, 2012 at 8:36 PM
JACK :-) , this has been my favorite contest out of all the ones I have sponsored this year.. Congratulations and thank you for the double journey... good night... XOX~ PD
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 7:53 AM
Smashing write Sydney, give em up quick xx
Sweetheart Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 6:11 AM
a fantastic job Jack on this contest.. I cannot think where to begin with it..best wishes luv..
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 10:01 PM
hahaha, I love how the very things that send one to hell are the things in heaven. unique!
Kendrick Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 12:49 PM
Good one..Reads like a winner to me..I think that PD will really like this one..Your presence at my work is always so uplifting.Sara
Williams Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 12:47 PM
Jack you make it sound quite nice ha ha ...wel done..David
Sivey Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 12:37 PM
This is a fabulous write! I really enjoyed the expressive nature about this entire poem! You've done excellent here my friend! "So much to choose" loved that line Jack! Great Work!!
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