Cherry Girl

CHERRY    GIRL

She stood in the rain there
Keeping  dry  her black hair 
And red lips , full and round
On a windy corner of town.

The rain beaded her plastic sheet
Protecting  the cherries from the street.
Fruit filled with sun from less rainy days.
With memories of the sun’s warm ways - 

They told a tale of southern climes
And milder  winters, warmer times.
Black cherries, red cherries, 
Glorious, luscious, shining berries.

She dug her hands into  a pile
Of a luscious far-south cherry,
Ripe and red  -  all the while 
Testing the full-round berry,
Feeling  for  soft form
With probing fingers firm,

Scooping up a large handful,
Feeling its weight with her pull,
And pushing it slowly
And so carefully
Into a thin containing bag,
So that it fitted snug.

Black cherries, ripe but fresh,
With thick juice to spill.
Red ones with strong tang of south
Sun in their soft flesh,
Keeping their liquid, until
It near melted in the mouth.

The fruits of southern ground  
Red and black and  softly round	
Memories  of warming sun around
The cherry  girl in the rainy  town.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 5:05 PM
lovely memory I would think of bringing it all into the present tense and perhaps not repeating "sun" in 2 lines abutting each other. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love (love the double entadre!)
Kendrick Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 2:02 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest...Sara
Eggins Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 7:27 AM
Congratulations on your Win in Catie's "Fanning the Embers" comp .. Love Jayne
Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 2:02 PM
lovely entry, congrats on your win in the contest
Freeman Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 11:55 AM
Congratulations Sydney on your fourth place, Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations Sydney on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Fanning The Embers". Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 5:04 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Sydney
Sweetheart Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 7:32 PM
Congrats Sydney on your win in Catie's contest with this super entry..enjoy your sweet victory tonight with luv..
Mehta Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 2:18 PM
Very creative wreite on the cherry girl in the rainy town, enjoyed it. Sydney
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September 26, 2010 at 1:34 PM
Sydney, hello enjoyed the flavor of your poem. I enjoyed your sweet trip down memory lane,..p.d.
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