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Cherry Blossoms

Cherry blossoms Cherry tree blooms love Its beam flowers invite sight And mood shower tail. 4/9/2013 Inspired by and enterd into: Black Eyed Susan's "1 Cherry Blossom Haiku" Contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2013 6:38:00 PM

Hello Abdulhafeeez, if you would like to join the blog contest,,, I can blog your poem on my blog.... xox~ Linda

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 4/18/2013 9:26:00 AM

A very nice Haiku, wishing you the best in the contest. Caryl

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/11/2013 9:50:00 AM

A very nice Haiku. Cherry Blossoms are beautiful. Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem. ..... Lucilla

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/10/2013 7:55:00 AM

Excellent haiku, Abdulhafeez!...good luck in the contest...Caleb

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/9/2013 7:15:00 PM

Dear Abdulhafeez, I would like to say Congratulations, now, as I do not know if I will remember to come back after the Contest is Judged.Excellent Haiku, my favorite form.YOU are an asset to the SOUP.Superb Quill. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 4/10/2013 1:08:00 AM

Thanks Harry

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/9/2013 6:38:00 PM

Hi, Abdulhafeez :-). it was nice having you comment a few of my poems. I'm liking the mistress talk...he he he. By the way, this is one cherry poem has me enjoying the nice lovely image. Thank you for inviting my eyes to witness this sweet haiku.... xox~ Linda

Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 4/10/2013 1:10:00 AM

Thanks my mistress for passing by. You're who you are to me~A.O

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2013 2:26:00 PM

Hi, there, Abdul. I think you are the one who commented at my blog. I answered you over there. When I do the Fave contests, it is probably only going to be good for members whose poetry I have been reading for a while. You will have to learn how to figure out the fave thing by just exploring the site and all its functions. On this haiku of yours, I think it is sweet. Did you mean to say "blooms love?" instead of booms? Luv, Andrea

Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 4/9/2013 2:56:00 PM

Yeah Andrea... You got them right... and thanks for stopping by