Cherry Blossoms

cherry blossoms- - the lake placidly reflects snow on Mt. Fuji © oct 30 2011 cgh
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Devonshire Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 3:08 PM
Such a serene mood this image creates for the reader, Charles. Very much enjoyed the uplifting feeling. I have seen murals in Oriental restaurants that are quite lovely, but none with the cherry blossoms. Beautifully written! Love, Carolyn
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November 1, 2011 at 3:29 AM
beautiful contrast of cherry blossoms and snow.. reminds me of my long visit to japan where i had to strain my neck for long minutes as the pesk pf my.fuji suddenly disappears from a wreath of clouds... astounding 'ku!..:) huggs!
Scripca Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 11:39 PM
I see a postcad with a beautiful landscape...beautiful Haiku, dear Charles!
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 10:17 PM
charles, this reminds me of the very first haiku I wrote in jr. high. Pink cherry blossoms/cast shimmering reflections/on seas of japan. Well, at least we had the same country!! And thanks for the explanation on your rule!
Wesley Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 4:49 PM
Hi Charles, we meet in different places! Lovely vision you paint here - you do these haiku things so effortlessly! Lizzie
Kendrick Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 1:55 PM
Interesting work..Must be a very beautiful picture of which you write..Sara
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October 30, 2011 at 2:15 PM
We did good. Was a hugh mural on a japanese restaurant wall.
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