Cherish the Such

Sitting alfresco, with a screen open to the Daily
On a fashionable stretch of street
Lined with expensive everything where
Scents of coffee roast, mingled with vanity
Shiny hair flicking insults and smiles, as waiters
Danced between tables of note

Such is life, he wrote with a grin
Beneath the image he sent to his wife
Of himself and his morning café
His last morning, as it was, of the way he saw life

Looking back that moment quantified
That life isn’t such isn’t that
For some…

The image captured a smug well-dressed executive
In a comfortable life, enjoying the successes 
Enjoying a coffee and the freedom
Enjoying life

The image also captured a boy
A boy in a chair
A special chair, with wheels and gadgets and
Controls just in reach
Of a life just such
Or perhaps just out of reach

Melancholy swept over him in that moment
Like witnessing the lowering of a casket of a loved one
He wasn’t sure if it were the tears that
Tendered an offer of concern from the waiter
Or, the fact that he’d spilled his coffee
He looked at the image again
Cherish the such…

Such is life he thought…
For some




Judy Konos Poetry Contest: C’est la vie
Mark Trichet
6 Nov. 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Deschler Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 12:02 AM
There are things in life that are worth living for, and sometimes, we just don't see them.... I really enjoyed this descriptive write. It is so powerful and true to life. Great work! Congratulations on your win, Mark!
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 1:03 PM
A very powerful descriptive poem Mark. I was all caught up in it as I read. Sad, yet seems to be a new beginning. Congratulations on your win
Mehta Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 9:09 AM
meaningful write, congrats on the win
Schumacker Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 2:47 AM
Good morning Mark, This is a very meaningful poem. Very well balanced, crafted and delivered with an interesting rhythmic cadence. It was an enjoyable read. Congratulations on your win. Earl
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 12:04 AM
wow love the comparison you made from here.. :) the plot and surrounding itself is so creative adding life and color to the main points. the message is a wow too.. .:)! congrats for the win.! .....olive eloisa here.. :)!
Trichet Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 12:10 AM
Thnx Olive for your visit, glad you liked it too
Allison Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 3:52 PM
great descriptive write with very powerful imagery many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Trichet Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 12:09 AM
Thnx Jan, glad you enjoyed it
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