Chelsea

She's Everything She is everything she ever wanted to be Striving the qualities she held the entire time Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder Not Still though Not Stagnant Moving rapidly Effortlessly, with perpetual motion opposing sight Never to be perceived Through the eyes beauty bleeds Ceasless motion away from the source Never leaving a shadow; Never fully absorbed Cast out every second through the pathway of sight The sun weeps in weary Brought to invisible knees His secret is clear His light includes green absorbs and disappears Unfair is very real, common Unknowingly pouring what she is striving to have So much given to never get back Until perception Realization Beauty is in the smile of the one that knows her

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/25/2016 3:49:00 PM

Philips , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Manmath Dalei

Date: 10/22/2016 6:32:00 AM

Brilliant....Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath