Chelsea

She's Everything
She is everything she ever wanted to be
Striving the qualities she held the entire time

Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder
Not Still though
Not Stagnant

Moving rapidly
Effortlessly, with perpetual motion opposing sight
Never to be perceived
Through the eyes beauty bleeds

Ceasless motion away from the source
Never leaving a shadow; Never fully absorbed
Cast out every second through the pathway of sight

The sun weeps in weary 
Brought to invisible knees 
His secret is clear
His light includes green absorbs and disappears

Unfair is very real, common
Unknowingly pouring what she is striving to have
So much given to never get back
Until perception
Realization
Beauty is in the smile of the one that knows her

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/25/2016 3:49:00 PM

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Manmath Dalei

Date: 10/22/2016 6:32:00 AM

Brilliant....Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath