Chelker Reservoir

(An Addingham Poem)

quivering breeze coax
ripples across the surface
corrugated clouds

© Harry J Horsman 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Delaney Avatar
December 28, 2020 at 2:27 AM
Wonderful sky and water imagery here, Harry: Nature is wonderful to get lost in our thoughts.. All the best for 2021. SuZ
Romios Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 11:51 PM
I just love this Haiku, Harry, I can see your words Pangie xx
Horne Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 12:46 PM
you've painted a lovely picture there, my friend - I could almost feel that breeze
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 5:21 AM
Love the corrugated clouds! I love looking at clouds!
Proxenos Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 5:45 AM
amazing imagery, great poem as always my friend. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 1:43 PM
stunning imagery. I sure love "corrugated clouds"
Sands Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 5:52 AM
Beautiful haiku Harry :)
Crabtree Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 9:53 PM
The wind and and the clouds perfectly presented :)
Roper Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 8:52 PM
Beautiful imagery,Hairy, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Melugin Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 10:12 AM
Harry, you painted a picture of a mirror image on a windy day as I am casting for a fish fry! Excellent my friend!
Andresen Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 3:47 AM
- Super haiku, Harry :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 10:14 PM
Great imagery as to be expected from you. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 8:36 PM
Love corrugated clouds! Nice, Harry!
Woodrow Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 9:29 AM
oh really good one! :)
Dome Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 6:21 AM
This is amazing, and once again, very clever,. Love the corrugated clouds.Excellent. Pete.
Pandit Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 5:48 AM
Lovely images, Harry.
One Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 2:56 AM
I do like reservoirs, we have some great ones here in the UK... Your imagery is great.
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